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Bad Sushi by *Yunners:iconYunners:

Categories Digital Art > 3-Dimensional Art > Characters > Female

©2009 *Yunners
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The Cthulhu soup special was a bad idea.

Just a quickie testing Daz 3.0

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*artguyjoe Apr 20, 2009, 9:30:20 AM
Overall, I like the composition of the piece. The fact that she is sweating does a lot to sell the distress that she must be feeling. I would suggest that her focus be a little more "cross-eyed" as the tentacle is right up close to her. Right now, her focus seems a bit further out.

I do see the dripping from the tentacle, but maybe a different shader for it? One that would give a more slimy appearance? Yeah, the main critique I have is for that tentacle as it should be the most gawd-awful thing that we see there. :D
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~SajuukkuujaS Apr 19, 2009, 12:06:21 AM
*shudders*

That's just creepy cool... xD

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~Elusive-Psycho Apr 19, 2009, 12:12:44 AM
All I can say is ew ew ew ew ew.
Then smirk a little and ew ew ew some more.
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~Biohaz-Daddy Apr 19, 2009, 5:34:34 AM
Everybody knows you have to chew those before swallowing. This is the heebies Yun.
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~freakspace Apr 19, 2009, 7:19:22 AM
I'm usually really picky when it comes to DAZ stuff (I'm horrible, I know!) but this is so many levels of awesome *fave*
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~Zal-Ta-TalOs Apr 19, 2009, 8:05:42 AM
Eeek! Man that's definitely one sushi platter I think I'll be avoiding! Bad ass job! :D

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~Wolfjacobs Apr 19, 2009, 11:55:55 AM
When in full view The face is intensely good. From the beads of sweat to the individual eyebrow hairs. I like the overall composition and the lighting shining around the edges of the arm and through the shirt. The one thing that I would change is on the creature itself. I would condider that at the moment the center of the tentacles looks more like the center of a daisy than an octopus. I would recommend replacing it either with a beak or with a tiny open maw with fangs to give the impression that this is something that could eat you. Overall a very fun piece with a fun facial expression.
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~Wolfjacobs Apr 19, 2009, 11:56:33 AM
When in full view The face is intensely good. From the beads of sweat to the individual eyebrow hairs. I like the overall composition and the lighting shining around the edges of the arm and through the shirt. The one thing that I would change is on the creature itself. I would condider that at the moment the center of the tentacles looks more like the center of a daisy than an octopus. I would recommend replacing it either with a beak or with a tiny open maw with fangs to give the impression that this is something that could eat you. Overall a very fun piece with a fun facial expression.
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*Yunners Apr 19, 2009, 2:59:01 PM
This is why I'm not a fan of the stuff. :lol:

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